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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
Shutter Speed: 1/10 second
F Number: F/5.0
Focal Length: 38 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Date Picture Taken: Sep 27, 2007, 4:15:56 AM
Artist's Comments
Finished and revised Wormwood.
Changes include longer legs, widened mouth and jaw, thinned and lengthened upper body and a new ciggy - which was made from a cocktail stick and Super Sculpey.
Now stands just over 9 inches tall. Sculpted in Casteline wax.
I really liked the original, but I have to say, this new version is even better.
I like the overall proportions of this piece. The lengthened legs make a huge difference. It may be my imagination, but the increased distance from the last button to the hem of the jacket and how the jacket falls due to his hand being in his pocket are very minor details that are examples of (what I see as) the improvement of the proportion.
I also like the glassy smoothness and length of his legs in contrast to the texture in his hands, hair, teeth and skin. The new cigarette is a fantastic detail.
One question, is this a remake or did you rework the old sculpture? The hair looks *exactly* the same. I'm not sure what would impress me more: the fact that is is a total remake and the hair looks the same or that it is reworked an you were able to make the proportions work with your changes. Either way, very impressive.
Nice work Jamie. I love the hand, and the tall, slim posture. I have one critical comment for you if you want it, or this is the time to stop reading. His teeth look a little bit funny to me, as they are on a very wide and stretched arc. I think that if you left a little bit of space between the sides of his mouth and his teeth ( by making the arc narrower) they would look alot more natural on the character. That's all. Great work.
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I like the overall proportions of this piece. The lengthened legs make a huge difference. It may be my imagination, but the increased distance from the last button to the hem of the jacket and how the jacket falls due to his hand being in his pocket are very minor details that are examples of (what I see as) the improvement of the proportion.
I also like the glassy smoothness and length of his legs in contrast to the texture in his hands, hair, teeth and skin. The new cigarette is a fantastic detail.
One question, is this a remake or did you rework the old sculpture? The hair looks *exactly* the same. I'm not sure what would impress me more: the fact that is is a total remake and the hair looks the same or that it is reworked an you were able to make the proportions work with your changes. Either way, very impressive.
Take care,
Randy
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